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Something in the way you smiled
Made me weak in the knees
My cheeks would blush a scarlet red
Like a wild drum, my heart started to beat rapidly

If you ever looked my way
I hid my face in shyness
While giggling softly like a preteen
Smiling from cheek to cheek

I can only imagine, you and me
Hand in hand, walking the streets of Paris
Side by side without a care in the world
Proclaiming to everyone our love for each other

You serenade to me the most beautiful love song
No words can describe how magical your voice is
Those deep, harmonious tones can tame the wildest beast
Each angelic note is as heavenly as the next one

But this is only the dream of a love struck girl
In reality, we can never be together
I notice you, but you don’t seem to notice me
No wonder they call this feeling a crush
©2007-2009 ~KittyRose
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Another entry from my Creative Writing portfolio.
It's based on this crush I had during my last year of high school. He seemed like Mr. Perfect and yet, we couldn't be together. This crush was indeed a big deal for me (I basically chased this guy throughout my senior year only to be left with a broken heart).
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Love this poem!

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Thank you and thanks for the fav:hug:

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco
OoOooOooOoo... Was he a Leo? hehe
You did an awesome job on this! I can see the true passion throughout! Awesome job!! :w00t:

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All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
awsome work..loved the last stanza..though I can think of a place I would have used the word fucking =P but I'm an illiterate bitch <3

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Me? I Try Not To Use Other People In A Way That Soley Gratifies Myself..You?

I Have Been Known To Eat Paint Though..
I'm glad you like it, thanks:)

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco
Thank you so much and thanks for the fav as well:hug:

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco
You're always welcome! ^..^

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Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
Wow. This poem is amazing! I can relate to it so well, then again, everyone probably can. You write so eloquently! Great job! :D

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Stupid fork, stupid spoon. Stupid Sun, stupid Moon.
Thank you so much; I agree, we can all relate to this poem. And thanks for the fav as well.
It's great to hear from ya, haven't seen you in awhile.

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco

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